I'm gonna replay your game again real fast, I remember not really being able to deal with it for very long which at the time I thought was because of the main character choice, but I think may have been more about the overall feel to the story, which was distinctly lacking in horror for me and felt more like a tragedy
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good art and interesting premise, but I feel that it truly would have been better if the main character were human, the main character actually being a wolf or dog or whatever doesn't really add to the horror, in fact I would go so far as to say it takes away from it. some of the best horror is good because our mind can find something to relate to or latch on to, so if we feel that we as a human are being treated like dogs we feel mistreated or demeaned, but if we feel that we ARE dogs and are being treated as such we feel prideful, also just the fact that the MC is a dog could be a good artistic choice, but only for like an intro, and don't make it seem like a fanfic, this is a horror game and shouldn't be taken so lightly. the monster design was great btw.
I should also say that I'm not trying to be mean, I think you are very talented and this has huge potential, also not saying you need to rewrite your whole game or anything, just trying to give some pointers if you're open to them.
pretty good and got a few scares out of me, but the story writing could be better, for example the poster could be more like (and feel free to use this I don't want credit or anything) "The [insert name here] family has been squatting in abandoned homes and facilities, the police believe they are performing ritualistic sacrifices and other occult activities, please report to your nearest police department if you think you believe you have spotted them. their likeness below. also saying "the protagonist" at the beginning is weird, just say you. anyway it was a great game not trying to be mean just constructive criticism.